The Yoga Challenge

The Yoga Challenge 
On the 17th of september 2018 room 7 did yoga all of room 7 were split into groups of 2 also Miss Ashley told everyone in the class all the rules then after that we began.

On the first pose it was very easy so that got everyone Extremely pumped
up for other pose so we got to the second pose there was 12 poses the second pose got a little bit harder but we tried our best boys are rivals against girls I don't know why. We started to go on the third pose everyone said THAT’S EASY! But some people who said that is was easy it was hard for them it was easy for me because im flexible enough for this challenge (so in the story we got to find out why but it might not happen in this story).

we got on to the fourth pose it was easy for some of us but all of us. When you fall of that horse you get back on that horse to for fill that destiny to do the impossible so make that destiny happen everyone was doing great in pose 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11 they were very helpful to people who need to exercise more in life.

The last pose was the hardest number 12 everyone tried their best but they fail also it would never work until Miss Ashley helped us but manly the girls me and my best friend Reign we were going to show the whole class but Miss Ashley told us sit down. Also my favorite was the 8th one because it was very funny also it was fun too there are more poses that are my favorite but I think pose 8 is my only favorite one that I like.

Author: Leon Junior

Checked by:Reign and Havea

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Surface features	Searched	Found	Fixed
Capital letters at the beginning of a sentence	✓	✓
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Capital letters for names of places and people	✓	✓
Full stops at the end of a sentence	✓	✓	✓
Speech marks when people are talking	✓	Didn't Do any Dialogue
Punctuation - ? ! ; : ‘	✓	✓
Words are written in past tense	✓
Connectives - next, then, afterwards	✓
Interesting and difficult adjectives	✓
Deep features
Introduction has who, what, when, where, why, and how	✓
Conclusion has a reflective statement or says how you felt	✓
Ideas/events in the right order	✓
3 paragraphs	✓
Metaphors and similes	✓
Onomatopoeia, alliteration and/or idiom	✓	✓
Different types of sentences - short, long, compound and complex	✓	✓
One thing Leon did well was Making his story long for people to enjoy. One thing Leon need to work on is Putting full stops in the right place.