The Big Crash

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	The Big Crash|By Leon-Lebron Chrisgen Paraha
Intro 2 sentences	A 28 year old man named Raiden was driving in his car going to go to his house. But all of a sudden Raiden was in a car crash.
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	Raiden had his car crash when he was trying to get home but he was speeding because he forget to get his glasses and then he got serious injuries he got broken rib cages and also he got brain damage but they were cuts but that is what happened to him. “CAN SOMEONE HELP ME!” Raiden said and some people herd so they went looking for him also when they found him one person called the fire fighter service also the other one
Problem 5-10 sentences	Raiden was trying to punch the door open but that never worked so the people who found him were named Jade, Dave, David Jasmine so they tried to pull the door open but that did not work either.
Solution 5-10 sentences	But the fire fighters and the other services came the policies secured the area the Fire fighters used the jaws of the life to cut the door open to rescue Raiden “Thank you everyone who help to try and save me ” he said.
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	So the ambulance took Raiden to the hospital so he can get better and heal his injuries. (So after a while) Raiden’s family came to see him and so he can have some time with his family before they have to go home and always have to not see him everyday because they miss their father.