Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Sentence starters for persuasive writing

                                            Breaks should be longer at school.

I'm absolutely certain that breaks should be longer so people have more time to play and hang out with their friends and so people can eat also finish there diet but people don't always want longer time to play because sometimes they get bored or they just don't want to play longer.

I’m absolutely certain that breaks should not be compulsory in school because heaps of people play to much and then teachers have all this work for you to do and the bell rings thats why i think that longer breaks should not be compulsory and because people will only want to play not learn at all that’s my reason.

Fidget spinners should/shouldn't be allowed in class.

I definitely disagree that fidget spinners should be compulsory so students can learn instead of focusing on the fidget spinners it makes people fidget with it because it says it straight in the title and it also causes distraction towards other people and will make everyone get it and our teacher will be mad cause of all the hard work and effort she put into it because everyone won't listen that's why i think fidget spinners should not be compulsory in school and in other classes. what will happen with the fidget spinner. 





Fidget spinner should be allowed in class

Most people would agree that fidget spinners can/might be allowed in class when kids are bored they can play with it even when you have to play hand games you can play with it rather than just going on your netbook cause you will yell at your friends and go like share the game with me and all that kind of stuff that's why i think fidget spinners should be compulsory in class and people like getting entertained so fidget spinners will be the best thing to entertain the person what will you child do with the fidget spinner.

I hope you guys understand our reasoning i hope you people will not/will let it be compulsory so that you

No comments:

Post a Comment