Kia Ora, I am a Year 8 learner at Tāmaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Te Puna Wairua and we have 3 teachers ko Whaea Lee, Matua Punehu and Whaea Saf.
Friday, June 29, 2018
Axel Blevin|Study Sheet story
There was man named Axel Blevins he wanted to make his dream come true by jumping of the tallest waterfall.
Me and my friends took a minivan there.We had to make a pot stop to food and gas when we got there we had to do a barbarcar to cook.Some of us went into the sea and had a swim.
After the long swim they went to hunt some animals to have something to eat for their lunch. Also they went and got some water for the lunch.Later on me and john went looking for the water when we found it we told the rest of the crew to first we munch than we go.After we munched we went to the waterfall and jumped off after that we went home
Thursday, June 28, 2018
FairyTale Introduce
Once upon a time
One sunny day
One beautiful bright sunny day
One marvelous day
One horrible rainy day
In a faraway land
In the deepest ocean
In the darkest prison
Far far away
In a dark forest
In a vast desert
In a creepy dungeon
In the scary woods
In a haunted house
In a movie set
In a creepy maze
In a wonderful school
In a small town
There was
A beautiful girl
An old man
Royal family
A wise girl
A handsome man
A traveller
A scary monster
A butler
Guards
Handsome prince
beautiful queen
Creepy clown
Young princess
Royal king
Famous celebrity
A gangster bodyguard
A music producer
A sad servant
A sneaky thief
Who was Lost
Enormously rich
Poor
Diva
Who lived in a cottage
Who had 6 sons and 6 daughters
Had a glass eyeball
Had a ginormous family
Lived in las vegas
Who had robotic legs
Who was a marvellous actor
Who only ever had onions
Who was a robber
Who lived on the streets
Part time DJ part time spy
Who had only leg
Who was a murderer
Who was a huge nerd
Who had one fat eye.
Once upon a time there lived a royal prince that was 18 years and his name was Johnny Zack. When he woke up he was next to creepy dungeon that had a royal guard that was guarding the door you only be aloud in if you were a part of a royal family and he did not know where he was. First he asked the guard where is this place but he said “It is in Londen and the date is 1976 June the 27th” the guard said. So the prince said thanks for all that information so the guard letted him in so he went to the bed room and went for a sleep
Tuesday, June 26, 2018
The Big Crash
Brainstorm of ideas:
- Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
- See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen, stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
- smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking
PEOPLE/SETTING
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PROBLEM
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SOLUTION
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Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,
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Car crash
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A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
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No glasses so couldn’t see
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injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts
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Firefighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
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On the phone
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Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.
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Fire extinguisher, put sawdust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
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Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.
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Title:
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The Big Crash|By Leon-Lebron Chrisgen Paraha
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Intro
2 sentences
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A 28 year old man named Raiden was driving in his car going to go to his house. But all of a sudden Raiden was in a car crash.
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Orientation 5-10 sentences
WHEN
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHY
HOW
CHARACTERS
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Raiden had his car crash when he was trying to get home but he was speeding because he forget to get his glasses and then he got serious injuries he got broken rib cages and also he got brain damage but they were cuts but that is what happened to him. “CAN SOMEONE HELP ME!” Raiden said and some people herd so they went looking for him also when they found him one person called the fire fighter service also the other one
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Problem
5-10 sentences
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Raiden was trying to punch the door open but that never worked so the people who found him were named Jade, Dave, David Jasmine so they tried to pull the door open but that did not work either.
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Solution
5-10 sentences
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But the fire fighters and the other services came the policies secured the area the Fire fighters used the jaws of the life to cut the door open to rescue Raiden “Thank you everyone who help to try and save me ” he said.
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Conclusion
Less than 5 sentences
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So the ambulance took Raiden to the hospital so he can get better and heal his injuries. (So after a while) Raiden’s family came to see him and so he can have some time with his family before they have to go home and always have to not see him everyday because they miss their father.
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Monday, June 25, 2018
Friday, June 22, 2018
Facts about the V-2 Rocket
V2 rockets
what are V2 rockets made of ?
Eyewitness accounts describe prisoners being hanged from cranes above the rockets assembly lines. Despite his complicity in the conditions at Mittelwerk, the engineer who designed the v2, Wernher von Braun, came to be feted as a hero of the space age.
Who invented v2 rockets ?
1944 was a German and, later, American aerospace engineer and space architect. He was the leading figure in the development of rocket technology in germany and the father of rocket technology and space science in the united states and the person who invented was Wernher von Braun.
When did v2 rockets attacks begin ?
Launched from mobile units, each V2 rocket was 14 `metres 46ft high and carried a ton 900 kg of explosives. The first attack on London, on 8 september 1944 gouged a crater 10m 32ft across, killed three people and injured 22 people.
How fast v2 rockets fly?
The speed of the V-2 rocket is 5,760km per hour.
Tuesday, June 19, 2018
Friday, June 15, 2018
If I was a Zeelonite
If I was a Zeelonite
Okay today is the day i go to the zoo for the day it should be fun to see the amazing stuff that is there . “After awhile” I said to the cashire Hi i will like 2 tickets please I said okay here is the money thank you said the cashery here is your 2 tickets thank you. I am very excited and happy today weeeeee! Man there is too much things to choose from like the amazing humans or the zeelonite wait i just said amazing humans I think I should go there first. “after spending so much time at the zoo” Finally i’m home I think I should make me some food then go to bed but first i should get something from the shop then i go to bed.
“In the next day” I just want to stay home today.The End
Talking about my character
My Character has bright orange hair with emerald green eyes and she has two plaits that are sticking out to her sides also on her forehead she has a fringe also she has a star colour t-shirt and with some silver gray on it. My character has a monkey that is bright yellow and puke green also with some lines that are dark green on him.
Wednesday, June 13, 2018
Friday, June 8, 2018
Bouncey castle
It was really fun to verse all my friends that really wanted to verse me also i won all my race’s but on this one it looked like i lost but i got out before my friend Paula.
Oreo's
This is a photo of me and my friends like Davlyn, Railey and
Havea doing the different moon’s there are with oreos.
Havea doing the different moon’s there are with oreos.
Wednesday, June 6, 2018
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